We have noticed that Group I did not present enough new ideas to change the problems about food (such as malnutrition) and health (eg. New illnesses). They made a great research and they have good knowledge about the theme, although, they haven't presentes solutions or ideas, which means lack of creativity.
On the other hand, they did present several quotes that can be useful as they come from very qualified professionals (such as Mr. Miguel Balero). They analysed them and selected the most important ones. As well, they seem to have a clear structure, as they submitted their work properly, in an organised and clear way.
So, in conclusion, we think that they did a good job: every idea was clear and well specified, quotes were relevant and not just some mere phrases and it was all written in good English.
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